SoundNinja on DeviantArthttp://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/https://www.deviantart.com/soundninja/art/Every-Story-has-an-End-150732075SoundNinja

Deviation Actions

SoundNinja's avatar

Every Story has an End

By
Published:
578 Views

Description

Sketchbook stuff. Ballpoint pen.
A friend who died of cancer :c
Image size
774x1000px 651.44 KB
Comments2
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
duraluminwolf's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Very interesting. I admire your use of cross-hatching to suggest the subtle shading of the figure. It makes his face look very "craggy".

The colour of the character's face looks almost "bloody". I was led to think of raw meat. Not only that, I was kind of reminded of a character from Hellraiser (please don't think I'm being disrespectful, here)

The text underneath the picture make this look like an illuminated manuscript. I think it really would have looked good (not that it doesn't look good as it is) if you'd stained the paper first to make it look "aged". Just a thought, anyway.